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Re: Santorini

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 9:12 pm
by Marv
They're maybe a bit too colorful and bright, makes me think of Hil's tracks ;)

Re: Santorini

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 4:23 am
by Kiwi
I am also (still) not 100% sure if this flowers are fitting the theme very well. Greece is a very dry country, maybe the flowers are a bit to colorful, to big, and still to static positioned. Maybe it's a place where some watering will be done, but the flowers feel like a "foreign body (?)" in the scenery somehow.

I'm sure you already put a lot of work into this Alex, but I would change it. What's about replacing some of the flowers with grass and more purly green plants, like bushes, small trees?

Re: Santorini

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 2:07 pm
by Alex
Turned the flowers into bushes like Kiwi suggested. I think it's an improvement. This turn is going to be the end of me lol

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Re: Santorini

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 4:52 pm
by Pyves
Trees are indeed an improvement in my opinion as well. ;)

Re: Santorini

Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2018 4:17 pm
by Alex
https://streamable.com/v2jbi
Here is what is probably going to be the final version of Santorini. Sure I could keep tinkering around on various points but I think it's time to call it done before I never end adjusting stuff. I thought about changing the skybox but I can't find one that I like more than the one I'm currently using so this is the one it will be. Now it's off to makeitgood.

Overall I'm super happy with how the track turned out. It flows well and every every part of it looks at least decent. I'm hoping to get it out in a few weeks at most but I've never done makeitgood this extensively so I don't know how long it's actually going to take. I've had a lot of fun modeling and I hope that I can keep this level of quality in my future tracks. Thanks to everyone for the tips and suggestions, the track would be nowhere near as good without you.

Re: Santorini

Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2018 4:40 pm
by Marv
That looks really good, I'm glad you're progressing so fast. Keep it up!

Re: Santorini

Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2018 5:38 pm
by Kiwi
The final version looks great and I can‘t wait to race it myself soon. I‘m still a big fan of your shading. ;)

Good luck with the makeitgood part.

Re: Santorini

Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 4:14 pm
by Alex
http://revoltzone.net/tracks/30962/Santorini
Santorini is out! Blasted through makeitgood so much faster than anticipated.

Re: Santorini

Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2018 8:55 am
by Pyves
Just tried it out - very fun, nice work! ;)

Re: Santorini

Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2018 11:41 am
by Black-Revolt001
it just misses the music that goes with your track

Re: Santorini

Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2018 1:46 pm
by agg1401
I found a mistake on the track, the camera shakes slightly if you hit the door vertically.